Cake chess

Chapter 2 - Surprising break

Our first moments of our chess match between confident Lydia and very boobilicious Beverly were rather one-sided in terms of fatifying excitement.

It is, once again, Beverly's move. She wants to set a trap with a couple of pawn cakes. Lydia moves ways Beverly simply doesn't understand so she continues with her mission. Lydia's smile grows wider because her only dilema is what to capture first. She goes for a pawn with her bishop and threatens Beverly's rook and another pawn. As soon as she captures the first pawn she does a fake yawn and the feeding mechanism stuffs the pawn cake into Beverly's mouth and pushes it deep into her throat with a light gag.

Beverly's bikini is cutting into her skin under the weight of her enormous breasts. She almost wants the shoulder straps to snap. And as she's thinking about the pain in her shoulders, her belly starts poking out from under those mega boobs. She notices it and gives her new belly pooch a squeeze with both hands, quick shake and a couple of slaps to see how soft and jiggly it is.

"Could somebody please cut these bikini straps? They're killing me but my boobs are so heavy I can't reach under." Beverly shouts in despair to the chess host crew.
Two guys run right to her with a pair of scissors each. They go as slow and gentle as possible to get the tiniest chance to even be close to such boobie balloons. One of the guys says he needs to lift the breast in order to cut the strap so he reaches under it as gently as possible. He's enjoying every inch under the softness until he reaches the belly. He wants to make it look like he's making sure he is where he's supposed to, so he squeezes one of Beverly's belly rolls.
Of course she noticed and so she gave the guy a look but she was enjoying it so much her blush and pelvis swirling movements gave her away.

The other guy was watching at first so he decided to help him. He went in front of Beverly to lift her breast like a bodybuilder lifts a heavy bar. As soon as he did, and the guy with the scissors cut the strap, the whole boob spilled out like a blizzard against the lifting guy who had no chance of getting away. He got smashed on the ground and almost fully covered with the overgrown boob sack.
The guy who cut the strap was so paralyzed it took him a couple of seconds to realize what just happened. He kept asking the smashed guy if he's fine because he had a hard time breathing and was moaning something. When he got out, they found out that he came in his pants upon the boob collision.

Lydia watched it with one eyebrow raised, stood up because she couldn't stand the guys being obsessed with her breasts and came to Beverly's other bikini strap to cut it herself. She leaned across the first boob (one of the guys noticed her pussy that just got uncovered right at his face), gave the strap a swift snip which shot up and backwards from the tension and the other boob balloon spilled similar way.
That exact moment Lydia started feeling funny. Her body started tingling, her belly rumbled and her buttocks flexed rapidly. The guy couldn't stop staring at her pussy, especially now.
Then, Lydias ass expanded from twiggy model to a 60in spankaple booty that put her off balance immediately.... Meaning, she collapsed on the leering guy's face, pussy first. Lydia didn't know how to get up and suddenly she froze, her ass and thighs started shaking, her eyes rolled up, her mouth opened and she screamed in orgasm as the guy was doing her not giving a crap about the lack of air. "Bet death ever!" He thought to himself.
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Chrysophase2003 1 year
Fun concept. And I appreciate the mix of science and unapologetic make-believe. But the rate of development is inconsistent, as is the narration. You've got a third-person omniscient narrator, a (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 1 year
2: pair of sports commentators, the two contestants, their speech, and their thoughts. Consider how you denote such people in future. For example, italicize the sports commentators and set them (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 1 year
3: into their own paragraphs, much as the speech of each character deserves its own paragraph. Speech is denoted with quotation marks, ofc, but italics are generally used to indicate direct thoughts.
Chrysophase2003 1 year
4: Stephen King's uses italics this way. But, since the commentators are in italics, maybe use italics inside apostrophes to show thoughts? Regarding rate of events, you are diligent in showing off
Chrysophase2003 1 year
5: Lydia's growth and fight against it (though hearing her thoughts as it happens would help), but Lydia being overwhelmed and breaking is quick and sudden. Why did she give up? Why was she competing
Chrysophase2003 1 year
6: if losing a single piece on the board would be so bad for her? Even amateurs know sacrificing pieces is necessary to secure victory. So, what was their motive? What drove them?.Was the prize differ
Chrysophase2003 1 year
7: different for each contestant, was it a 1 wish for anything kind of deal? And what audience are the commentators speaking to? Try to "flesh" out such scenes by describing the location. That way
Chrysophase2003 1 year
8: the reader will be able to more easily visualize events instead of seeing the 2 characters in either a void or the kind of infinite white from the Matrix. "Guns...Lots of guns."~Neo
Chrysophase2003 1 year
9: It shows an imagination and nascent talent. You simply need to practice and hone the fundamentals of prose so that your imagination and talent burn brightly for all to see and appreciate.